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Rain:900: Shaking

Synopsis

Rain is shaken after her encounter with Debbie in the previous scene, noting that Debbie clocked her. As she ponders her situation, Todd approaches her.

Author Notes

Woo! Nine-hundred pages! :D

Kind of a last-minute addition, this one. The last panel here was originally planned to be the first panel and just lead into the next scene right away, but it felt choppy to me. Plus, I like taking a moment for Rain's little bit of introspection here. I feel like it actually adds a fair bit, from her acknowledging the pride of defending herself from someone who's been giving her a hard time for a while now, to addressing the nagging concerns that were planted in her head. Interpret how you will.

But who's calling to Rain? Or is that perhaps obvious?

Transcript

Rain thinks to herself:

I can't believe I just said all that.
I'm glad I did, but I’m still shaking and kinda feel like I'm gonna barf.
Still... She DID clock me.
Are my hair and voice really still that bad? Is anyone else just quietly clocking me and not saying anything?
Stupid Debbie...Even if she never talks to me again, I’m gonna be worrying about this forever...
Yo! Girl!

Rain thinks to herself:

Hm? Is he talking to me?

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